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The Essay above is my college admission essay. I submitted this essay to University of Connecticut, University of New Hampshire, and University of Massachusetts Amherst. I got accepted to all three of these schools. My essay links to multiple expectations:
"P"- Personal Choices and Goal Setting because I spent a long time looking at different schools to decide which one to apply to and goal setting because my goal was to get into every school that i applied to.
"T"- Teamwork and Leadership because in it i describe the way Coach Hurlock and sports shaped my life and also how i spend time coaching younger kids to teach them the teamwork values I had learned.
"E"- Effective Communication because college application essays have to be well written in order to compete with the thousands of other students applying to the schools. I had to go throught many, many drafts before I had my final product that I thought was good enough to send in.
"P"- Personal Choices and Goal Setting because I spent a long time looking at different schools to decide which one to apply to and goal setting because my goal was to get into every school that i applied to.
"T"- Teamwork and Leadership because in it i describe the way Coach Hurlock and sports shaped my life and also how i spend time coaching younger kids to teach them the teamwork values I had learned.
"E"- Effective Communication because college application essays have to be well written in order to compete with the thousands of other students applying to the schools. I had to go throught many, many drafts before I had my final product that I thought was good enough to send in.